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    I LET IT ALL HANG OUT (ADVANCED FREESTYLE)

     why am i makin this conscious decision

    to eviscerate a.k.a. cut da belly outta 

    this freestyle with precision

    no indecision i dont need 2 or 3 revisions

    no advanced physics no statistics or mystic division

    gimme the mic stand man

    come on let me requisition

    becuz when my mind dialates i deliver

    these babies like a physician

    or perhaps  some ladies prefer a cee section

    with a small incision

    the emissions from my freestyle exhibitions

    leave ladies with no inhibitions

    my expedition into lost words

    leave me talkin shyt like a politician

    in my 3rd eye my oh my

    i see supervisions

    livin just enuf for the city

    but like stevie i have my superstitions

    but i have a suspicion

    that this advanced freestyle edition

    will be the premier definition

    the juxtaposition of my metaphors

    make me a rhyme musician

    yes my ebonics and histrionics

    be creatin nuclear fission

    im in a cosmic transition

    so i dont mind the opposition

    anyway i leave pretenders 

    in various states of decomposition

    my bad pretty lady 

    i see you are in a state of indisposition

    i meant no imposition

    but wait

    you do have a nice..ummm..disposition

    so let me show you the composition

    of what you been missin

     

    i let it all hang out

    boy whatchu sayin

    i let it all hang out

    dee stop playin

    i let it all hang out

    okay big man show me how

    i let it all hang out

    awww suke suke nah

     

    why am i takin the rhyme  indigents

    and puttin em thru the philadelphia  experiment

    after all when they see me they take a  shhh...

    lets just say they be covered in excrement

    i beat so many azzes they need extra strength linament

    hey fine fellow aloe is good to soothe 

    your bruised boo boo

    let yo baby mamma rub you

    while i spyt this shyt thats sick like swine flu

    im always proficient in rhyme increments

    expedient with my militance

    impatient with too much merriment

    its an infringement on my significance

    dee is always diligent

    so let me tell you my ingredients

    i am 2 cups of brown suga

    and a sin a man dash

    throw in a diggy bone 

    so i can wax dat aaa...ummm..nevermind

    one tablespoon of kindness

    some yeast for raisin hell

    and a nekked woman to bake me at 350

    so i can swell

    i provide nutirents for the ladies 

    but i do wear a condiment

    dont want subsequent children 

    from my petty indulgence

    ladies if you cant take my parliament

    cant get up for the down stroke

    i will be lenient

    i dont want you to be hesitant

    please dont be obedient

    a  lady just  laying there is rather inconvenient

    in fact be a little disobedient

    so that can be my acknowledgement

    for your eventual ravishment

    but just remember my rhyme variant

    comes from allah  the beneficent

     

    i let it all hang out

    boy  whatchu sayin

    i let it all hang out

    dee stop playin

    i let it all hang out

    okay big man show me how 

    i let it all hang out

    awww suke suke nah

    • 25 August 2011
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